Think of which cooking things are canonically acidic. Tomato, citrus, vinegar. If you have to use a word other than "acidic" for the smell of acid, I'd go with "sharp."
I don't want to say "acidic" right from the start, because it takes the pov character a moment to figure out what he's smelling (which is, in fact, an acid). But yeah, that was mostly what I was thinking.
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Date: 2010-10-18 08:26 pm (UTC)Think of which cooking things are canonically acidic. Tomato, citrus, vinegar. If you have to use a word other than "acidic" for the smell of acid, I'd go with "sharp."
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Date: 2010-10-18 08:31 pm (UTC)