on reflection

[swan_tower]

Oh, that's why I couldn't figure out how to end the scene last night.

Because it wasn't time to end it yet; we needed about eight hundred more words of Eliza having that epiphany I thought was going to happen later. And now it's clear which of the next several bits of story needs to happen first, before we move along to the others. So if you'll pardon me, I'll get back to the book.

Comments

[alecaustin.livejournal.com]

Always good when that sort of thing comes clear. Good luck with sorting out the rest of what has to happen!

[edgyauthor.livejournal.com]

Haha, I have so many revelations like that with my own books-in-progress. Good luck writing!