Fun Things to Do to Characters, #277

[swan_tower]

This story is coming out slooooowly. I'm not sure whether that's because it's a murder mystery (plot-wise; the setting is fantasy), and I've never written one of those before, or because I'm essentially taking two characters my brain assigns to different stories and trying to make them be in scenes together. Maybe this is why all my youthful fanfic involved original characters interacting with the casts of stories I'd read; I don't seem to do well at the crossover thing. Hell, my brain had an instantaneous meltdown when I tried to imagine Ree talking to Nicholas after returning from Arcadia, and that was after all the Memento characters had already shown up in the Changeling game, thus establishing the bridge for me.

But! Making two characters have a conversation where they're talking about entirely different things, and neither one of them realizes it? That's fun.

(Actually, one of them just realized it, in the last few hundred words I wrote. What I need to decide is when the pov character will figure it out.)

Murder mysteries, man. They're hard. I suspect this one would go easier if I'd started from a base of "here's how the victim died and why," but instead I'm struggling to make that be not a macguffin for the investigation, which is the real reason I'm writing this story. We'll see how that goes. This is one of those "permission granted to write a crappy draft" situations, though not nearly to the extent that "Chrysalis" was. I just need to write my way through before I can go back and make it tidy.

Unfortunately, I've about hit the end of the scenes where I knew what I was doing, and now have a vast howling wilderness between me and the end, which is the other part I know. Must figure out what to fill that with.

But not tonight. I've done 1,325 tonight; that's respectable enough that I can stop.

Comments

[diatryma.livejournal.com]

I've done the two-conversations-with-the-same-words thing too, and it is so much fun.