I did like that scene. It had development and humor and all that good stuff.
But it just didn't make sense with the thing I had happening in the scene before, so away it goes.
Such is the necessity of revision, alas.
But it just didn't make sense with the thing I had happening in the scene before, so away it goes.
Such is the necessity of revision, alas.
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Date: 2008-02-27 06:16 pm (UTC)