Rook and Rose Book 3, Chapter 3
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swan_towerIn which, as is traditional, we get our caper on again!
I guess that's a minor spoiler, but really only in structural terms -- we do have a habit of putting some swashbuckling action into Chapter 3 of each of these books, a la the Lacewater duel in The Mask of Mirrors. This particular one features a plan going very wrong and then a plan to fix that being not through at all well enough, though in fairness to the person who failed to do the thinking, the outcome was still probably better than if they hadn't done anything at all.
It also features an amusing little callout to the game that lies behind these novels. The whole series takes place in Nadežra, so we can't do the "fish out of water" absurdity of Game!Ren being dragged out into the wilderness and having to learn about The Naturez . . . but I can and did put her near a cow, which is more or less an alien creature to her, and far too large for comfort. When you have a character who's highly skilled in their chosen field, of course the fun thing to do is make them deal with something totally outside that field -- a realization I had as early as my second published novel, when I made my accomplished ninja protagonist ride herd on a bunch of adolescent girls. :-D
True to form, this chapter was done somewhat out of order, including both its final scene being written when we were a couple of chapters further along and something significant being added to one of the existing scenes. (It took an embarrassingly long time for me to notice that, uh, maybe somebody who's vital to a future plan ought to be told about it . . .?) Also some pov stumbles: we managed to sail right past the point at which we were supposed to shift to a different viewpoint, then realized that actually, there wasn't as much meat as we thought on the first one, so we wound up having to redo all of it in R--'s perspective. So basically, par for the course these days.
Word count: ~19,000
Authorial sadism: The cow is the least of it. We need to remember to give someone nightmares over the consequences of that insufficiently-planned plan.
Authorial amusement: Using the weapon of the enemy. Also, yes, we have totally made a running motif of the coat thing.
BLR quotient: The rhetoric got very bloody all of sudden.
(originally posted at Swan Tower: https://is.gd/vTW0Q5)
I guess that's a minor spoiler, but really only in structural terms -- we do have a habit of putting some swashbuckling action into Chapter 3 of each of these books, a la the Lacewater duel in The Mask of Mirrors. This particular one features a plan going very wrong and then a plan to fix that being not through at all well enough, though in fairness to the person who failed to do the thinking, the outcome was still probably better than if they hadn't done anything at all.
It also features an amusing little callout to the game that lies behind these novels. The whole series takes place in Nadežra, so we can't do the "fish out of water" absurdity of Game!Ren being dragged out into the wilderness and having to learn about The Naturez . . . but I can and did put her near a cow, which is more or less an alien creature to her, and far too large for comfort. When you have a character who's highly skilled in their chosen field, of course the fun thing to do is make them deal with something totally outside that field -- a realization I had as early as my second published novel, when I made my accomplished ninja protagonist ride herd on a bunch of adolescent girls. :-D
True to form, this chapter was done somewhat out of order, including both its final scene being written when we were a couple of chapters further along and something significant being added to one of the existing scenes. (It took an embarrassingly long time for me to notice that, uh, maybe somebody who's vital to a future plan ought to be told about it . . .?) Also some pov stumbles: we managed to sail right past the point at which we were supposed to shift to a different viewpoint, then realized that actually, there wasn't as much meat as we thought on the first one, so we wound up having to redo all of it in R--'s perspective. So basically, par for the course these days.
Word count: ~19,000
Authorial sadism: The cow is the least of it. We need to remember to give someone nightmares over the consequences of that insufficiently-planned plan.
Authorial amusement: Using the weapon of the enemy. Also, yes, we have totally made a running motif of the coat thing.
BLR quotient: The rhetoric got very bloody all of sudden.
(originally posted at Swan Tower: https://is.gd/vTW0Q5)
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