step by step, we'll get there

[swan_tower]

While I was in Boston, I finally figured out what "And Blow Them at the Moon" wants to be about. The Gunpowder Plot, obviously; but that's a long and complicated tale to fit into a short story, and could easily turn into a tedious history lesson instead of an interesting piece of fiction. Ideally, this will not be like Deeds of Men -- i.e. not pitched primarily at people who have already read one or both novels, and please God not twenty-one thousand words long again -- what I want is a short story I can try and sell to a proper market. Which means I need some frame I can put on the Gunpowder Plot, a frame that consists of a character and an engaging emotional arc for same.

While being an Onyx Court story. And it needs to explain some of the weirdnesses in the history, most notably the Monteagle Letter. That's not too much to ask for, right?

So I think I found it, and my 599 words I had in December are now 1,105. Not a huge amount of progress, but I think I'm going to have to do a lot of wrangling to make this thing happen; I suspect there will be a great deal of infodumping that later gets scrubbed out, as I sort through what actually matters to a) my protagonist and b) my reader. Which means my progress will likely remain slow. But I'm going to try to get this done soon; today I ordered a metric ton of research material for the next book, and I need to get my head out of the seventeenth century and into the nineteenth asap.

And, y'know, it would be nice to get a story done in the first week or two of the year. Good omens and all.

Comments

[sartorias.livejournal.com]

Oooo that sounds intriguing!

[swan-tower.livejournal.com]

Let's hope it lives up to that reputation. :-)