That one was tough to write because it, like "Selection," is kinda-sorta second-person pov, and that isn't something I experiment with a lot. But it was the only good way to show the contrast between the temp and the person she was subbing in for -- at least, the contrast as the narrator/temp saw it, which may not be what you'd call reliable . . . .
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Date: 2009-09-15 11:19 pm (UTC)