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marycatelli ([personal profile] marycatelli) wrote in [personal profile] swan_tower 2020-08-25 03:56 am (UTC)

It was years ago, but I still remember realizing that you should put the dialog with the action tag, not break and then put the next character's action tag in the same paragraph and breaking for the next character's dialog. . . .

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