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havocthecat ([personal profile] havocthecat) wrote in [personal profile] swan_tower 2020-08-25 01:36 am (UTC)

Which is a thing that makes a WHOLE LOT OF SENSE, actually! But oh my gosh, do I wish my former betareaders had the words to explain why the ends of my scenes didn't work. I did finally figure it out after a lot of struggling, but I sometimes still struggle on HOW to end a scene these days.

(I still love Jack O'Neill and Buffy Summers, though. I'm a sucker for a snappy line, but I try to put them maybe mid-scene.)

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