With number 3, are you saying something like Kvouthe (to use tNotW as the example) describing a typical walk down a street, mentioning women walking about but then nothing more unless the woman does something for Kvouthe, thus "earning" more of his attention?
This is a great tool, if I am understanding it correctly, though I can see one would need to be careful not to bog down the narrative with scene details that don't drive the story.
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With number 3, are you saying something like Kvouthe (to use tNotW as the example) describing a typical walk down a street, mentioning women walking about but then nothing more unless the woman does something for Kvouthe, thus "earning" more of his attention?
This is a great tool, if I am understanding it correctly, though I can see one would need to be careful not to bog down the narrative with scene details that don't drive the story.